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by Welshdreamer4202/24/15

Deliciously secretive

I love the idea of a steaming, hot conversation between Sub and Master taking place whilst the parishioners are handing out the potatoes! Brilliantly done, a sensual & engaging read. Thank you x

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by belle900002/24/15

Thank you!

This story is just perfect. It provides the reader with a clear understanding and detailed account of what is happening in such a way that allows them to feel as though they are really there, witnessing or even partaking in the scene itself. That level of anonymity portrayed within the two main characters and their appearances creates that perfect illusion of anyone you can dream of taking their places and the whole situation becoming real and personalised to them themselves. I would love to hear more about them and their escapades!

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by LadyElisa02/28/15

Risky Business

Just wow. I really, really liked the story. I loved how you described the surroundings in so much detail, like it was possible to actually envision what was going on around the man...which made it all the more real when the phone rang. The flash of anger at her disobedience. And I have to say what I found the most arousing of the story was him having to experience, to enjoy what was going on the phone without letting on to the crowd around him what he was hearing, how hard it would have been to keep a straight face, how easy it would have been to be discovered. That element of risk, of danger was incredibly erotic.

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