Death Wish

Fun

little tale

Just this?

The story was just this? I like your stories, this is different, but also different from the others...It's fun to read, but when it ends we seem to miss someting...Will part 2 show up?

Big...good looking...

...what happened? No Navy Seal, no Martial Art Expert - not even a Billionare?!?
A wonder he even gets a few plain women interested,,,Just kidding...nicely told story.

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Brian, your ass is grass and Luciano is the lawn mower. The end is inevitable. Good writing. Death for a piece of tail? No fuckin' way, Jose. Cheers!

Nice Tale

This screams for a second chapter or more.

Thanks for the offering.

Depression?

Unlikely that someone who has no problem picking up women will have issues with depression.

Great Start

Looking forward to chapter 2.

story left me hanging

Story has potential

Good beginning

Nice start but it really needs another chapter or chapters. suggest more depth about Brian, Gina, and the other characters including the husband.

Thanks for your hard work and I'm looking forward to the continuation of the story.

Woodmanone

Interesting

I seen stupid but this guy tops the list. It's only a matter of time. For the wife also. You don't fuck with my paisans.