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The Rhythm of the Heart

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by Anonymous

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by Bodi12/27/05

If you've only one story,chance,choice:This is it!

This is absolutely without a doubt the best short story dedicated to the heart and soul of a woman's orgasm.

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by Anonymous06/08/07

Bleh!

An abysmal story built on fractured prose as infatuated with its own volubility as it is exasperating.

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by Anonymous08/24/07

BEAUTIFUL!!!

A+++++++++++ "Anonymous in San Diego" is smoking crack, this story was BEAUTIFUL and very sexxxy!!!

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by lordchilworth08/16/08

thanks

thanks... fine, fine thing...occasionally beautiful, intimate and exquisite... fairly well constructed and overwhelmingly erotic... more please

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by Anonymous01/21/09

waiting

okay, so I'm new to this and I LOVE this, not loved, I still enjoy it very much so. I realize you haven't submitted anything as of late, but please please please more!!
maybe a sequel?? it feels openended and god this is amazing and begs for more!!!!
great write

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