Overpowered at the Office Ch. 09

You cannot leave it there

You hear me lady !!
Get scribbling pronto.

Keep going

I have fallen in love with this story you gotta keep writing!

Please keep writing...

Bellie444: Please keep writing. I love this story sooo much! It is like a soap opera...always leaves you hanging and wanting more.
I am hopeful that you will carry this through...and little Simon Junior will be born into the world - and Simon will be there in the delivery room with his camcorder...acting like a prick while he zooms in to catch Simon Junior's head popping out of Sandra's pussy.
I totally love how Simon controls her. And then after Simon Junior is born, she will have two of them controlling her life in different ways. Poor Sandra! This will never end for her. The story is totally hot!

A Great Story.

Keep going let him knock her up.

Perfect ending!

Leaves it open to the imagination. So glad you avoided the whole revenge aspect. Very nice.

See, now I for once am the person that wants to see the gal get outta this mess

MfulJ, no Simon should get it comment??!! Lol
I'm that Anon, btw. (bbc)

My head would be spinning, too, after this mess. The Simon mess, not the story. The story is not s mess. It has me thinking how I narrowly escaped a few Simon's in my life. Or maybe I'd have some of my fantasies fulfilled?? ;). Meh, either way, back to Sandra, I need to see both possible endings to this story. But that's just me. Can't blame me; the story is that good.

Please continue with the story, it'd be great to know how Sandra will deal with the aftermaths, and you could bring that ex boyfriend of hers into the picture. Best of luck!

Dang, MJim, I was hoping you'd be satisfied with a prospective poisoning :P

I could write more, but I don't want to turn the story into a 'bad movie sequel'. There are too many different ways the story could go from here, I can think of at least 5, which might please some but would ruin it for others, hence the open ending...

Good finish!

I like that it ended this way. It's not about changing your story to make MJim or anybody else happy. Frankly got very tired of hearing him insist that it had to turn out a certain way. We heard you the first 5,000 times, dude. Enough already.

It's about what the AUTHOR likes to write and what he/she finds interesting. Obviously very talented and the story was compelling and evoked strong feelings and opinions among the readers. Hope to see more offerings from Bellie in the future.

I hope she kicks his ass

What a jerk Simon is! I really hope she kicks his ass in the end and finds a morning after pill right away. It is not possible to have a proper partnership with someone who treats you like this, so whenever the girl ends up liking the jerk in the end, I find it an extreme letdown. The sex might be great, but it's not the deciding factor if the personality leaves a lot to be desired...

Prospective poisoning ?

Naaah, not painful or tormenting enough. Death by 1000 cuts would be sufficient, while boiling his testicles in oil. BBC and I will get on your case...
That makes it what now ?
5002 ?
5003 ?

Uh-oh !.....WHO is 'STEVEN' ??

Is 'Steven' schizoid Simons alter-ego ! Or what! What's going on here !

Steven

Steven is vaguely referenced in Ch1 :)

Mjim, you crack me up :D

I cannot believe is over, I loved it so much! It would be so awesome if you would do two different endings. Like one chapter about how she gets pregnant and accepts her fate and I don't know maybe falls for him. And then another chapter where she takes matter into her own hands. But whatever you wanna do. Hope you write another chapter story!!

Hmmm...

...yes, 1,000 cuts ... and maybe some lemon juice.

Excellent..

What a top story! Just about everything here in enticing erotic detail.
Loved it...what a film it would make, eh?!

I love Simon

This sure does wet my appetite, all the chapters from the beginning have been so hot.#cantwait4more

finish

Thank you for finishing a good story

the end??

I cannot believe this is the end. with all that fighting spirit I cannot believe it would take one orgasm for her to just except this. Honestly I was hoping that this story would end with the dude getting what he deserved in the end or at least him eating some humble pie and groveling a bit.

Disappointed

Great writing but I'm disappointed that she seems to give in at the end. He's so mentally unstable and abusive that Sandra actually considering relationship with him is ludicrous .

Sorry if my previous comment sounded too harsh, your story was very good and I quite enjoyed it.

I miss Simon :)

THE END?

Urmm.....is this the end?
Hoping like crazy, there's more?

I might come back to this, but not anytime soon. I'm aware that when/if I do, one camp will be bitterly disappointed.

Hi

I miss Simon, please write more;)

Great story, but......

Once he penetrated her, she gave up. Huh?? Magic dick syndrome strikes again. I want/need her to keep fighting and to escape.