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A very strange tale
Not that you didn't do a decent job of writing it, but at the end her behavior was just off-putting. With absolutely no explanation of her actions it was just a strange read. She had an apartment so she must have had a job? Or did she live there as someone's else's sub? The odd behavior combined with the total lack of background just served to make this not entertaining. I just had too many questions. Sorry. Maybe next time.
hot story
Would have liked more detail behind her behavior. Really enjoy your writing... Thank you
Been sitting here waiting..
for SOMEONE to comment with the word "strange" so thanks.
My wife is a Nurse, actually back in school to become a full Doctor right now, part of why I haven't been writing.
This little tale came from a client she told me about. The lady places herself into crazy dangerous situations, some with a good chance of being harrassed, accosted, likely raped? Debs asked me about that, wanting to know what in the world would cause someone to have that kind of fantasy, one of the clients comments was "It wouldn't be my fault?"
Like I would know?
I was fairly sure when I posted it that I was inadequate to develop it.
Oh well. I will go back to what I think I know about,
MGM
Good Read****
I say again I like your style. Thanks for sharing.
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