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Hubby Wants to Cleanup Own Creampie

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Author, you are one disgusting individual!!!

Go far away...

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by Anonymous02/24/15

hot

Great story. Very hot.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Another 1* baboon joins the ranks

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by Anonymous02/24/15

You could make this, like, a 47 part series, detailing the descent of their marriage . . .

into cuckdom! Wow, wouldn't that be exciting? Well, wouldn't it?

I bet Ronnie would give it a five (you don't have to call her Bonnie).

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by bonnietaylor202/24/15

I was going to type your mother's name like pig or cow dear annony

but for the story I gave it a 5. But thank you for checking my typing. As long as you are doing that you ass wipe you're leaving the writers on this site alone!! BTW. Fuck you in the heart!!

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by Anonymous02/24/15

good story

I enjoyed this, quick and to the point, sexy and hot. 5*'s. Keep it up. Fuck the naysayers, no reasoning with them. Never feed the trolls, just write what you like to write.

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by spredm02/24/15

Very nice

Great story been there done it, love to eat my wife's pussy after I shoot my load in her

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Won't it come as a surprise then.....

when you realize that all this time, he been fucking your maid and daughter. In fact, your daughter, just turned 19, seduced him almost a year ago and put him up to this wild act to keep you occupied and distracted as her pregnancy progresses....
You should have sent her to live with the ex.
And you should have suspected something was up, when almost as abruptly as she turned 18, her wild behavior and rebelliousness stopped.
And the maid! Well, who knew....she was so shy, but the pretty Latin girl was always especially deferential to hubby, and you thought it was an act of extreme respect and gratitude......well.....and lust, wasn't it? You thought she looked forlorn and longing, when it was actually need for his cock pumping her pussy so hard it made her feet leave the floor when he'd fuck her from behind. But the last few days, even her stoicism was overwhelmed by a constant Mona Lisa smile...she's just fallen pregnant and waiting for just the right time to tell him. She's decided to wait until she starts showing, and perhaps to join your daughter and him one afternoon in a couple of months and tell them both....maybe the three of them can take care of each other as the horniness from the pregnancies make them both constantly wanting.
It's a good thing she managed to hide her morning sickness from you, by starting her mornings with water and soda crackers in the maid's quarters. She can't imagine how your daughter kept it from you so long....but as she's just barely started to show, she's wearing much more conservative clothes....and you thought she was settling down.... The maid fantasies about the three of them coming into your bedroom late one night in baby doll negligees to show you their rounding, swelling bellies and make you eat them to endless orgasms. She wants to stoke down with the three of you and be one, big happy family. Yes, baby has settled down, the maid seems so happy and you're feeding your man his own cum! Now, that's settling down.
Well, in a way, you all are!

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by impo_6002/24/15

A normal act between wife and husband turned into...

A normal act between wife and husband turned into a degrading act. From what she says he had done everything through life to make her loose her respect for him...And with respect gone, soon love is gone too!!! people who thinks this act isn't natural, then are false moralists!!! What is wrong is take a normal act and transform it in a degrading act...2*

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Questionable

At least they're married and exploring their sexuality, between themselves. When she started fantasizing and questioning herself about bringing others into the play then it started going south for me slipping into a slope of humiliation and cuckoldry. Fantasy is one thing, sarcasm turning into possible reality is another. A quick erotic fantasy if this is what turns you on. In the heat of passion it's possible.
Bonnietaylor2, this is one time I won't challenge your score, but your feud with Anon is getting tiresome. What does "Fuck you in the heart" mean? I'd rather fuck you between your legs and then lap up my creampie. lol Isn't this fun dear?

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by bonnietaylor202/24/15

Well no sex for you them!!! But that's OK with the women of the world we hate fags like you!

Fuck you in the heart means you would be dead. If it gets old stop bitching about stories you know you don't say you like. Avoid my comments and just go away you sad little man!!! But we all know different asshole, you fucking love these stories! And you will NEVER get me or any other woman with your attitude.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Not sure why she needs to humiliate him

And of course he had a choice. One of two actually. He could have thrown her off. The story never mentioned that she was 240 lbs to his 170 lbs so unless that was the case he throws her off if he wants to. And if she is heavy and has him pinned? Imagine how fast she gets off him when he bites her labia or clit. So forcing him doesn't seem to be in the realm of plausibility. And when she turned around I KNOW his cock was flacid. I think that his fantasy had turned sour as he listened to her demean, degrade and humiliate him and that would be the first and last time he ever ate his cum out of her. Her attitude spoiled the entire thing. What a cunt. Speaking of which, I see Bonnietaylor is on her broom again. Some things never change.

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by bonnietaylor202/24/15

I have two brooms you pig shiting ass wipe

And I will keep adding comment to help these writers offset your sad little boy bitching!! It's a wonder you can see anything over your ridicules attiuide. But then we all know you are a fag in the closet

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by Anonymous02/24/15

bonnietaylor2, shut the fuck you

you sorry gutter whore. The only thing you're good for is to lick the piss off a dead monkey's ass. You're only bothered because this sorry ass story hits so close to home. Do you shit in your husbands mouth. Maybe he licks the elephant cum out of that swamp you call a pussy. Maybe he gets fucked in the ass more than you do. Maybe your lover thinks he is more woman than you. Or is it that your a fag yourself and he has the balls you want. Who knows why a whore like you exist, but as long as you do, they'll all ways have a bed in the local whore house for disease riddled filth like you.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

My wife helped me too

That first time is tough! We don't get into humiliation, it's all about sex and having fun.

In the past 30 years I remember very few times when I didn't clean her up after I filled her up. She knows how much I enjoy it and sex for us is for me to fuck her and cum, she usually masturbates while I fuck her. Then without being prompted, I turn to my back, she climbs on top of me, puts her fuck hole on my mouth and I start cleaning. After having rubbed her clit, she wants me to stay away from it so my job is to use my tongue to get deep inside and clean it all out. She is usually wet as all get out and I rub my face in her crotch, coating my self. I really enjoy it all!

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Sharing Cum is Quite the Norm for us.

My wife and I are also VERY oral. "Creampie" eating, "snowballing," and "cum-flavored kisses" are quite the norm for us. She is a world-class fellatrix and loves wearing "pearl necklaces" and "cum facials" to bed. I also love eating and licking cum out and off of her. Sometimes I will give her a nice "cum facial" just so I can lick it off her face and share "cum-flavored kisses" with her whilst I am fucking her.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

re: bonnietaylor2- no sex for you then

I'm touched for your concern.Don't worry dear, I don't have any problem getting or keeping a woman. Never did. According to your angry comment, one is not allowed to criticize. Did I say this was a bad story, no I said it was questionable, leaning toward humiliating cuckoldry. Are you that shallow that only praise is acceptable? Did I offset this story with my usual 1. No. So what is your problem? Calling me names only strengthens my resolve to even the playing field to those that give meaningless and worthless scores just to get even with anonymous. Did I say I read most of the stories you probably don't read yourself, but just score to get even? No, but yet you make assumption of readers you don't know anything about. Don't worry babe, I'm going to stick to you like flies on shit. Have a nice day beautiful. Isn't this fun?

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by Anonymous02/24/15

love the story

Despite some of the vitriol between commenters here, I have to say I loved this fantasy. Thanks for it. I gave it 5 stars.

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by KarenE02/24/15

Didn't Care For This

I have no problem with him eating his cream pie, in fact I don't see what the big deal is.

Most here (I think!) don't have a problem with the wife sucking her husband's cock after he cums in her, how is this different?

Where I have a problem is with her sudden need, with no indication that she had any dominant tendencies, to dominate and humiliate him.

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by litereader5402/24/15

Fantastic

Thank you so much for a well written story about creampie eating. My lover & I share this pleasure often. I love cleaning her out after I've made the deposit AND it drives her crazy with lust.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Loved It

This is a favorite fantasy of mine. As for actually going ahead and eating my semen from my wife's pussy or off her body after ejaculation, I have the all too familiar problem of losing the desire to do so after I cum. If I can get up the nerve to do it, I will try asking her to request me to do lick and suck her clean. Maybe that is what it takes. Anyway, I loved your very erotic and arousing story. Thanks for the inspiration.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Excellent story

Everyone has that certain kink that just does it for them. You hit on mine. Great story. Don't pay too much attention to the negative comments. The title said what it's about. If it's not their kink, they shouldn't have bothered reading it.

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by Anonymous02/24/15

Anything between hubby and wife is ok in bed but as soon as she said anything about fucking someone Elsa I would have put her in her place. If she tries it divorce would be definite.

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by Anonymous02/25/15

re: Karen E-didn't care for this

I agree. Once again you make more sense than most on here. I made it a point earlier that I didn't have a problem with their sexual adventure in the privacy of their home. Nothing wrong with what they're doing, if it isn't your kink, fine. When she started bringing in others with her verbal humiliating comments then it become something else entirely. Did he at any time ever indicate he wanted outside help in his marriage? Didn't say it was a bad story, just that it turned into a less desirable one toward the end. By all means keep on writing. Thanks for the effort.

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by rightbank02/25/15

I was with you till the last paragraph

In fact I was thinking, good for them. And then it all went off the tracks.

Does she ever fellate him after sex? With the fluids from both of them on him? Does she ever kiss him after he has given her an orgasm orally.

Does he kiss her after she has had his ejaculate in her mouth?
And, If not, why not?

Does he think it's ok for her but not him?

To me, there is nothing wrong with any of these "kisses" between a loving couple who want to stimulate their partner to even higher levels of pleasure. Everything they do to each other that is pleasurable is a bonus. In fact, I don't understand the whole "force me" to go down on you after we have had sex routine. It is their own combined fluids and it can be a very erotic time for both of them.

But, when she decides to include others, forcing him to participate whether he wants to or not is wrong.

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by Anonymous02/25/15

A few questions, with a few theories

So let's say a guy is jerking off. Does he cum in a tissue? On the floor? On his stomach? In his HAND?? Whatever the case, ( and lets also assume that this is totally private time, and no one has to know) how often is it that this guy has tasted his own cum?
Now lets wonder if he is honest with himself to admit the truth of this to anyone else?
Now, the thing is, many folks seem to think this is ok, what is the big deal? What could be the reason for NOT doing it; for having a problem with it?

What happens when you have a booger up your nose? It might be one thing to admit to picking your nose (see my parallel to masturbation here?)......and quite another thing to admit eating it! GROSS, you say. I'd never. That is SICK! But then again, how many 8 year old boys who have picked their noses didn't try it out once or twice for a taste test....BUT THEN convieniantly forget ALL about that once when questioned as they are now "all growed up"!

I submit that somewhere, somehow, somebody put it in to the heads of a generation of young males, that tasting their own semen was just like eating your own booger, and THAT is why so many men are repulsed by the idea. Now granted, and please understand that this is NO justification for these guys, and I am not arguing for it to make sense. I would agree that the whole thing falls into pieces IF you still expect your partner to ingest the same fluids that you seem to think are "too gross" to sample yourself. But.....

There are STILL plenty of females, who DON'T want to "swallow" either. Blowjobs might be a rare gift, but never to completion. And I would say that couples who put up with that attitude from her ALSO have a higher percentage of those very same females WHO LOVE THE CUNNILINGOUS! So really there has ALWAYS been a double standard here. A higher percentage of men have always been expected to devour a woman's juices orally, even if she WON'T return the favor. So the part B of this, is saying "Ugh OK baby, just not after the creampie", and the sexual tit for tat grows from there.

Notice that (up until now) I have made no mention of a percieved threat to his masculinity. Any guy who knows what he is doing between a woman's legs, has NO problem feeling like man. Slow foreplay, building to penetration and an orgasm is just the beginning. An experienced guy knows how to keep her riding high on the roller coaster- so to speak. Keeping those orgasmic spasms happening by returning back to her gash with your mouth..........The idea that you just blasted one off up there, is usually secondary to the goal of wearing her out to exhaustion and hearing her saying something in the after glow like "You made me come so many times baby, I lost count!"
Yeah, he isn't worried about his masculinity.

Of course it always helps when she also says: "I love you, sweetheart"
"THAAANKyou!"
OR REALLY ANYTHING
that is ENDEARING AT ALL!

As so many have commented already, the 180 degree shift THIS wife takes towards humilliation, and degradation was more than unnecessary, it was confusing. Why was it no longer about just the two of them? Why was she making him feel bad for wanting to give HER pleasure?

If this was a real world exchange, and not just sombody's bent-out fantasty, then it would be a lot easier to answer KarenE's question. Why don't more men like going down on a woman after their own ejaculation in her??

Sorry author, don't think you'll get too many converts with this version....

P.S. This comments thread has convinced me of something that I actually realized before. BonnieT doesn't make any sense because she is either Drunk or Stoned or BOTH, when reading and responding to comments.
P.P.S. Let this serve as a warning to you all: DON'T DRINK AND TROLL!

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by Anonymous03/08/15

loved it!

This has long been a fantasy of mine. I'm going to share this with the wife . Tks for sharing

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by phil221303/10/15

Wrong category

I felt this would be appropriately placed in the fetish category. It seems that this isn't in my own view loving wives but to each his own. Thank you for your effort.

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by Jay Richards03/15/15

More Please

Hi, I'm jay. I am looking forward to more stories from you. The subject is a fan favorite. Maybe he will want to go all the way and involve her ass. By the way, Ignore the Anonymous guy, he is a Troll around here. Please check out my stories too.
Jay Richards

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by sinsational8303/18/15

DAMN !

I truly wish there was more to this story. Damn I do, it was just that good for me to read. I will be reading some of your other stories and I hope I won't be let down. Good job on this one though.

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by sinsational8303/18/15

Well

Maybe I should say any future stories you might decide to write.

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by Nick_Nice03/19/15

Loved it

Don't listen to anyone who says that your story belongs in a different category. Loving Wives is for stories that involve wives. That's why people like me come here. Anyway, I loved your story. I love the description of your husband eating the creampie and I like that there's some verbal abuse. 5 stars and I'll definitely check back for more.

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by Nick_Nice03/19/15

Oops

In my last comment, I meant to write "the" husband, instead of "your" husband, since, as you state, you're a husband writing it from your wife's point of view. I guess that's what happens when you type too fast. Anyway, thanks again for a great story.

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by Fighting4103/19/15

Remember When

Remember when Loving Wives was filled with good authors who produced great stories that had depth and really engauged the reader?
Now all we get is this pathetic crap story after story of cuckold shit that is mind nummingly droll and totally non erotic except to those who have no self confidence

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by Anonymous04/08/15

WISH THAT I WAS YOUR CUMSLUT

I WOULD LOVE TO WITH YOU TO HAVE YOU MAKE ME CLEAN YOU EVERY TIME

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by AngelPie4Mongo04/12/15

MY MAN WROTE THIS...

Everyone has thier different kinks, everyone likes something different. There's no reason to be hypercritical of this writer because he has a fantasy. I think it is sexy that a man can write about something that makes him a little vulnerable when in reality he is a strong, intellegent, dominant male who typically takes the lead in all aspects of his life.

Just so you know...he (this author and I...whom also happens to be the love of my life), will be playing this fantasy out tonight when he gets home from his trip. ;)
~Love you, Mongo.

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by mrwidehorizons04/20/15

Nice comment Angel!

I hope we get a story of how it goes! I'm glad you stck up for your man. People are way too critical here! It's a free fantasy site for fucks sake! Lighten up annon commenters!!

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by Anonymous06/16/15

Fantastic!!!

Loved it!!! My wife introduced me to my desire, by blowing me, then passing it into my mouth via a kiss. I loved it even more when she held my head and fucked my face. And the dirty talk does inspire both parties. More!!!

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by lonelyslave07/04/15

turned me on

I thought it was well written and pretty hot

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by johnf08/04/15

Loved it!

This was so well written & this scenario has always been a fantasy which you could have helped to make reality as I have just shared your story with my wife 😉

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by rfhh195908/17/15

I wish I could show this to my wife

This is my desire spelled out so excellent

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by Anonymous09/02/15

Perverted garbage by degenerate sicko ! "1*" !!

The worst !

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by Anonymous09/27/15

Yummy

great story until the end, not a fan of the idea of others, but I sure love to lick my cumout of my wife after sex. It took years to get her to try it, now it happens quite often. She surprised me this morning, she never lets me cum in her mouth. She gave me a blowjob and kept on even though I warned her I was cumming. She took it all in her mouth and came up and fed it all to me and I eagerly obliged! Not sure I could eat another mans cum, but mine, any day! Loved your story!

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by jm035810/27/15

LOVED IT !

This is a great story ! Thank you.

Pay no attention to the negative comments by these "Anonymous " children. The title says it all. If this type of story is not your thing there's no reason to read it.

Great story. FUN to read. GREAT POV and play by the wife !!!

Look forward to reading more of your work.

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by Anonymous10/27/15

Why will the Health care insurance fee be high?

HPV virus epidemic is among promiscuose women's pussy so for creampieeating is danger for cuckolding lifestyle husbands for HPV (Human Papilloma Virus) which could cause OROLARANGHO CANCER after some years in men!

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by Jay Richards11/23/15

Continue please

I was hoping you would write a part 2 to this story. I am so fucking hard right now.

Jay

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by Silver401/23/16

Loved it.

Great story. Makes me want to try it. The negative anonymous commenters can get stuffed.

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by Anonymous02/04/16

Truly scrumptious

A hot story. Leaving nice fresh spunk somewhere and not licking it up always seems such a waste to me and this sounds like a great way to ensure every drop is lapped up. I am lucky enough to have a lover that shares this view which makes for lots of sticky fun. Earlier this week he came round and after he played with my tits in the hallway until my nipples were dark and swollen and my knickers soaking wet i needed his cock. I sat on the stairs and he stood in front of me and took his cock out and stuffed it in to my mouth as far as I could take it. Then we moved in to the dining room and I bent over the table. He lifted up my short skirt, pulled down my knickers and tights and fucked me hard til he filled me up with his cum. Then he hardly caught his breath before I turned over and laid back on the table with my legs wide so he could lick out all his lovely hot spunk while fingering me to an amazing orgasam. His face was sticky with cum as we kissed before quickly tidying our clothes and hair to go off to work. A great start to the day.

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by smcock02/14/16

creampies

I love licking my cum from my wife's pussy or off her body. Now I want to taste another mans cum from her pussy.

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by Anonymous02/28/16

Thanks

Awesome story

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