48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 05: Juli

Loved this story from the start

And loving it more and more as the chapters unfold.

I like the story just hope julie becomes stronger and fights back and escapes...it will give more adventure and thrill to this story :).

Very good

Julie's second role should be dark in the bedroom. Whips chains kinky stuff.

Thanks!

All credit for Julie's story goes to my co-author, J Spe. My goal is for each woman to be scattered across the world and have a unique experience. So far so good...........
We are open to suggestions for future chapters.

keep it coming...

my only complaint is a sniveling nomenclature one...
this is 'part' 5, and my recollection was that the past 'parts' had been 'chapters'
so when i started here at 'chapter 3' it threw me off...

but if that's the biggest complaint you get, you're doing it right!

Very Good.......But

When I first read '48 Hours on Blue Bayou' which turned into several chapters, I was very aroused by the whole series.
I still am, but assuming all the men were murdered and thrown overboard from the Blue Bayou and the ladies are falling deeper and deeper into the world of slavery, I would like to see (at least some of) the ladies escape in "I Spit on Your Grave" fashion.

Thanks for your comment.

Whitehusband, please be assured that the men were not murdered. There were hints in Pt. 1 that they would survive. My co-author and I are not into extremes, torture, snuff, etc. It might never be written, but my projection of what happened to the men is that they were taken a safe house, treated to a wild weekend with some of Albert's 'leftovers', and released with a threat of retaliation. Albert's crew then scatters to the wind, to reunite in 4 months. A stretch perhaps, but then almost every story on this site requires a "willing suspension of disbelief," (Samuel T. Coleridge)