Don't stop now
I love you, Leanne. Please keep writing. You are very talented, and I love reading your gripping stories. Your descriptions are marvelous. Glad I was able to find your chapter 3 in the new category. I feel connected to you.
this is beyond my dreams
Leanne, very well written. You have a great technique of using descriptive words throughout the story.
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please continue
Don't stop now
Leanne, I love you.
I love you, Leanne. Please keep writing. You are very talented, and I love reading your gripping stories. Your descriptions are marvelous. Glad I was able to find your chapter 3 in the new category.
I feel connected to you.
please continue
this is beyond my dreams
very descriptive
Leanne, very well written. You have a great technique of using descriptive words throughout the story.
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More submissions by Leanne_sissy.