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The Visitor Ch. 03

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by Anonymous02/25/15

please continue

Don't stop now

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by Anonymous02/25/15

Leanne, I love you.

I love you, Leanne. Please keep writing. You are very talented, and I love reading your gripping stories. Your descriptions are marvelous. Glad I was able to find your chapter 3 in the new category.
I feel connected to you.

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by Anonymous02/28/15

please continue

this is beyond my dreams

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by Connie_Ann02/28/15

very descriptive

Leanne, very well written. You have a great technique of using descriptive words throughout the story.

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