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by LordDragonFire02/25/15

Needs work

This wasn't bad, but the dom/sub switch happens way too quickly. At one point, the narrator has soaked panties, but a paragraph later, she mentions she'd decided not to wear any.

The basic premise isn't bad, but neither character is developed enough to really be interesting.

It's a good start, but it needs some work.

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by Anonymous02/25/15

This was a complete shit storm. Bad idea bad grammar, total shit

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