Since this is your first submission, let me welcome you! It's good, descriptive writing and quite a turn-on. FIVE STARS, and I hope to read more of your work in future.
Thank you so much for the lovely words! I really feel so proud that this is getting decent reviews and I can't thank you enough as a new erotica writer that you decided to comment. It really is so encouraging. Thank you for the lovely welcome, even though this is actually my second writing, just to let you know.
Honestly, thank you for an amazing comment, I really appreciate it so much!
That was some first offering, for which my sincere thanks! I hope it was the first chapter of a longer work and I would love to read more of your marvellous writing. Welcome, thank you again, and please have five stars with my good wishes!
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Good stuff!
Since this is your first submission, let me welcome you! It's good, descriptive writing and quite a turn-on. FIVE STARS, and I hope to read more of your work in future.
Thank you!
Thank you so much for the lovely words! I really feel so proud that this is getting decent reviews and I can't thank you enough as a new erotica writer that you decided to comment. It really is so encouraging. Thank you for the lovely welcome, even though this is actually my second writing, just to let you know.
Honestly, thank you for an amazing comment, I really appreciate it so much!
welcome!
Thanks for sharing! Hope to see more of your work soon!
fantastic!
nExtremely fun to read. The language is vivid and descriptive, and the dom is actually likeable.I'm looking forward to reading more from you!
Wow!
That was some first offering, for which my sincere thanks! I hope it was the first chapter of a longer work and I would love to read more of your marvellous writing. Welcome, thank you again, and please have five stars with my good wishes!
Beautiful job
This was very well done. I look forward to more stories from you.
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very nice
Very decent Dom. Well written :)
A beautiful story of submission and how it made a woman even more beautiful. The sort of story I would love to read to my young daughter.
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