This particular story is a bit laid back compared to some of my other writings but it builds a base for future Sarah stories and hopefully you will enjoy anyway!
Your review is dead on WatcherRob but you know what they say about always leaving them wanting more! I actually have two or three novels worth of material that I'll be sharing. I'm also trying to write erotica with a real storyline and memorable, if not believable, characters.
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This particular story is a bit laid back compared to some of my other writings but it builds a base for future Sarah stories and hopefully you will enjoy anyway!
Really need decimal point scores
This deserves more than a 4 but not quite a 5. The ending dropped for me. Liked it a lot, look forward to their use of the chair and the Sybian.
Always Leave Them Wanting More!
Your review is dead on WatcherRob but you know what they say about always leaving them wanting more! I actually have two or three novels worth of material that I'll be sharing. I'm also trying to write erotica with a real storyline and memorable, if not believable, characters.
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