Hannah's Revenge

sad

and disgusting

what a sad and disgusting piece of trash you are

troubling

troubling story. Only a deeply disturbed person would write a story such as yours.

eww

That is just nasty. I don't know what happened to you but I hope you heal.

Keep up your good work

Sad, but quite hot and well written. Dont bother about the negative comments. People are different. Keep on your good work!

Cool!

They should both be covered in shit and then eat shit oatmeal and shit ice cream and shit covered fried chicken and shit milkshakes. Yyyuuuummmmmmoooooooo!

actually kind of interesting. dont normally read this kind of story but i couldnt stop. ignore the flames. keep writing

:)

Appalling

How could Hannah not make her lick her armpits too? That was what I was waiting for.

Well done

You really have to make another one. Maybe her waking up in Hannah's room doing some nasty shit?

ASS SOUP

I think you can do way more. And have all of Hannah's friends be involved. Each one more filthier and smellier than the next. Sequels can be made. And I could help.

Want more

more.

Great story

A really great story. Looking forward to seeing where Hannah takes things from here. Maybe some of Hannah's friends could get involved in her humiliation and some blackmail to keep her reluctant victim firmly under her control. Ignore all the flamers and keep adding chapters. More please!