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Home-Town Hero Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous02/26/15

Excellent Start, When Is The Next Chapter??

Very well written without psycho babble. This could go a few chapters easily with what you started with.

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by Anonymous02/26/15

re: total rubbish

the title said ch1. its a start but only 1 ch
I Liked it looking forward 2 more

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by chytown02/27/15

Good Start****

Looking forward to future chapters, Thanks for sharing.

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by Anonymous02/27/15

AHHHHHHHHH poor wee Anon RE: total rubish

Whats wrong,, not enough to stroke to when mommy read the story to you

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by patnutt02/28/15

thanks

Thanks for the upvotes. Working on Ch 2 now. If you have any suggestions feel free to pm me. I can't guarantee that I will take all suggestions, but I will at least consider them.

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by rightbank02/28/15

Great start

and they have the whole weekend ahead of them.

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by Anonymous03/06/15

An entire Romance in one page! Wow!

Seriously even though you put together anentire Romance in one page I'm glad you serialized it and am looking forward to reading more in a few minutes

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