Hi. I liked that you jumped right to the main thing. The sex scenes were nice and there was not any boring descriptions. But I felt that There should have been some more action between Amanda and Steph. You finished it just when I was getting hard.
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Anonymous02/26/15
Wow - still trying to write a decent story and failing
And it figures the lady within would like this garbage. After reading the story she posted today and then yours I had to wonder where all the decent writers went.
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I felt a little cock blocked
Hi. I liked that you jumped right to the main thing. The sex scenes were nice and there was not any boring descriptions. But I felt that There should have been some more action between Amanda and Steph. You finished it just when I was getting hard.
Wow - still trying to write a decent story and failing
And it figures the lady within would like this garbage. After reading the story she posted today and then yours I had to wonder where all the decent writers went.
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