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Desperate Measures Ch. 00: Prologue

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by Anonymous02/28/15

Amd this guy graduated from Law School?

How is that possible? Everything he says or does makes him appear to be dumber than a stump. When your main character has the demonstrated IQ of a pea the story falls into the abyss. This was just silly. No stars.

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by Anonymous02/28/15

I wish

I wish I could find a pill like that, lol, Although I crossdress, I rarely can find a man that will fuck me like a common whore, At least with a pill like that I would have a real pussy to get filled and fulfill my wish of being used as a cunt ass whore slut,
continue your story, I will be looking forward to it. Diane

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by Anonymous02/28/15

it has potential

I think you are setting up a good foundation and I would love to see the story progress. I think you should make the main guy seem more intelligent since he has a collage degree in law. I would also like him to have a name.

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