All Comments on 'T Square'

Short.....but very good. Your longer stories are much better.

Thank heavens for the portal. A woman reader recommended a story of yours yesterday....something about a Nikki?? But the comment disappeared before I could look for it. When I saw the comment on this story I recognized the name...so now I can find it :)

BTW...this story was pretty good too. I decided to read it as it was a quickie;0

Was this a part in a series? More intro was needed but the action was great.

A shame about the tong. Apart from that, very well written and very sexy. Made me wet.

I like it. A little different, but the intimate relationship between the master and sub is not overplayed.

You switch tenses in the middle of the story, changing the Master from 'he' to 'I'. I found it a bit distracting.

Sorry...I only just saw the last comment.

I wasn't switching tenses. The Master knows his sub. I was conveying his knowledge of what she would be imagining, thinking and wondering.