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by thebuffalo02/27/15

Sorry, guy. This wasn't very well done. The telling of the story was very stilted, virtually without any sign of emotion. You need to relax, feel it happening, and let it flow.

Keep on writing. It will come together for you.

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by Anonymous02/27/15

Good one

I really liked it. hot story. maybe could have been a little more build up, but i thought it was great.

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