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To Freeze Fire Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by ariesgirl02/27/15

She sure made a not so smart move by flagging down a stranger since she is on the run.

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by tabbymidnite02/27/15

keep going

kepp going have to find out what happens next. Really good story, great detail.... nothing like a lil sex, action and intrigue in the am...

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by bierce03/01/15

Sneaky good

Lots of questions. Your story gives fleeting images of what may come. Please continue.

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