She sure made a not so smart move by flagging down a stranger since she is on the run.
kepp going have to find out what happens next. Really good story, great detail.... nothing like a lil sex, action and intrigue in the am...
Lots of questions. Your story gives fleeting images of what may come. Please continue.
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She sure made a not so smart move by flagging down a stranger since she is on the run.
keep going
kepp going have to find out what happens next. Really good story, great detail.... nothing like a lil sex, action and intrigue in the am...
Sneaky good
Lots of questions. Your story gives fleeting images of what may come. Please continue.
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