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by LitCrit02/27/15

Ho Hum

Waaaaay too clinical - (pun intended) We can tell the girl had a fun orgasm because she "shuddered"? And Ginger " insisted that I use my finger on her pussy for a long time before she allowed intercourse" ? Almost as exciting as a root canal! I'm not sure if I should tell you to try again or not. You seem to have little grasp on what makes a tale erotic. Do a LOT more reading on this site before you try writing again.

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by Anonymous02/27/15

cool

Different way of writing, and I thought it was interesting but it lacked erotica. Otherwise, I did like the way it was written.

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