Wife Cheats in School Outfit

Nice outline

When are you writing the story.

This is not finished is it.

Good start where is the confrontation between the two,this is not finished is it?

Look,

I left my story incomplete becasue I was challenging other writers. You just killed your story for no reason! What happens now? Does he divorce? Where is the confrontation?

C

He didn't confront her?

He didn't confront her as soon as he saw her cheating? Why? He should have confronted her and ask her to never come home!!! Now she could go with the lover and fuck him every day!!! I don't know if the story is finished or not, but after her cheating, still wait for her to take her home...How stupid is that? 1* for his attitude facing her cheating...

You left it incomplete...

...why did you feel the need to kill your own story? Did the doorbell ring and keep you from writing a decent ending? Keeo up this attitude and no one will read any other story you might post.

We Already Know!!!!!!!!!

You're a submissive wimp and you are going to justify not saying anything to her and tell yourself that it was a one time thing.
Problem, she knows she has you and she will get more active with her extra activities...after all, she let him feel her ass in front of everyone, licked his tongue in front of everyone and all had to notice her leave down the corridor with her fucktoy. She immediately went to her knees and sucked him off and then, without hesitation, told him to fuck her so...what part of her being a slut did you miss?
I dare you to divorce her, it is NOT who you are...Cuck!!!
At the very least you should have ended with a note that you began to realize you were turned on and wondered how your marriage would go from there once she discovered your fetish...or...you definitely were going to Divorce her!
Your ending did not show any character or promise that you have any sense of authorship for good reading!

You forgot to include the part where he cums while watching his wife get fucked.

I admit I really am unqualified to help you with this wimp cuck type story, but there are a LOT of examples here for you to learn from. Letting his wife go out dressed like a teenage tramp was a good start. But I think he's supposed to admit he enjoys the thought of other men lusting after and maybe, if he's lucky, touching his wife. I admit I just started skimming once I could tell this was another wife watching/sharing fetish story, but did you be sure to describe how huge her fuck buddy's cock was, and how she grimaced trying to force all the dick inside her, then there should be some whimpering, and begging for more, and declaring how much better he is than her husband. Well, like I said, you can just copy and paste most of your story from what has already been written before. And don't worry about any of the other writers of these type stories getting angry with you for stealing parts of their stories. Most of them are already sharing their wives, and have learned to just cry and jackoff while you use their stuff. Guess you can relate to that. Good luck.

Seriously

This is terrible. No harm in reading. Don't write.

Just another typical sicko author.

Written for the sicko's who are sexually challenged.

why the lawyer

why would you go see a lawyer? seems like she should go out in that outfit more often..

Too short

Not enough background and that certainly wasn't an ending. This felt more like an attempt to write the first chapter, you ran out of ideas, condensed the whole story and by doing that, failed to tell a story. Just a few Cliff Notes. Not good.

Wow , what shitty comments.

If he was going to see a lawyer and divorce her ass. He was doing the right thing. Say nothing and cover your ass and assets.we still need a finish to this short story. What happens next and a confurtation with his slut wife. How did she really end up with that outfit if she remarked how inappropriate it was. Then she fuck this guy friend and says her husband is picking her up. What she do with all the seaman. ...?....?. Please finish the story and ignored all the jack ass comments.

The story was too short and incomplete, what happens when he gets home

You really need to finish this story and ignore the sicko commentators who are just plan jerks.

Two Questions

You did not answer two initial questions: (1) If he was frozen and could not intervene when they were having sex, why did he not just leave the building? (2) Assuming he did wait until they finished, why did he wait to drive his "faithful wife" home?

Another femhusband piece of crap

# 1

This is pathetic

Wouldn't a real man have at least confronted the whore and her fuck toy before they consummated the act...preferably with a metal chair across the back of his head. Then he should have dragged her naked whore ass through the reunion and announced he was disposing of a piece of garbage in case anyone wanted an unfaithful whore for a wife. Then he should have driven home alone.

finish the story

Where he shows her the pics he took on his phone and stops at a motel on the way home and tells her he will bring her clothes by the next day and expect the divorce papers as soon as he can get them prepared. aOr just drop her off and tell her she is history. I my self wouldnt divorce id just take everything and go on with my life as if she didnt exist anymore. If she wants a divorce let her get it and yeah Id see how much of our money i could (blow ) before she could get any. And lol if she got all up in the air. I would also just quit my job and take off and given time I would take up another identity. What she did with an old classmate that she had never done with her hubby would be her death knell. Or we could divorce and she could become my slut whore doing what i wanted when i wanted however i wanted including swallowing and letting me sell her sorry ass to either make money close a contract or to get me in bed with other women

Why bother even picking her up?

Let her get her own ride home, it probably wasnt the first time so why bother even being there?

re: Wow , what shitty comments.

"Please finish the story and ignored all the jack ass comments."

Uh? Finishing the story, addressing the points you made was the gist of most of the comments. How are yours valid and theirs shitty?

Finish the story

Finish the story and let the husband complete his thoughts with action.

Porous story

a good spouse attends with the other no mattter how dull. She had a slutty costume on, a real husband would be the one doing her in a hallway. A good hubby wouldnt leave her barely dressed to be hit on. U left her fucking some guy, nothing to say or do but be a mute? And she doesnt wonder why you are mute and acting distant? Porous.

what a punk.

Stick with your rubber doll.

Author- Really? What a pile of dog shit! Is this author related to bonnietaylor2 [that genetic reject]?

Fuck, what a wimp!

Why not leave her there?

If the author had any gonads, he would have had the husband leave her there at the party and throw her stuff out on the lawn and turned on the sprinkler. When the bitch returned home the husband would promise her that if she tried to enter the house, he would put her in the hospital. Cheating sluts do not deserve the protection of being a woman.

Yup! Getting a lawyer would have been the first thing to do...

but he should have busted in, taken pictures with his phone camera (court evidence) and bust a chair over the guy's head. Then smacked slut wife around, then left her.

A 4 for improvement.

I commented that your last story read too much like a journal. This one seems better. Once again, consider constructive criticism, ignore the those who just want to build their self esteem by tearing others down. Nothing is more pitiful, in print or in person, than a man who runs his mouth about what he'd have done, when in fact he did no such thing when faced with the situation.

Ex #1 The guy who would have smacked the lover over the head with a chair. then dragged the naked women through the crowd. Don't those words conjure up images of the high school big mouth who always bragged about all the pussy he was getting, when in fact he was the only virgin in the class? Sort of like two little boys walking through the graveyard, both scared to death, yet each keeps assuring the other he isn't scared.

Console yourself with the thought that you at least had balls enough to try and you used a pen name, just like some of the most notable writers of the last century. Keep writing and I think this story needs to be expanded. GOOD LUCK

Not a story

The author didn't write this story; he just masturbated it. No character background; no ending, just a big fuck scene with the wimp husband watching. I agree with another comment that he should have just left her there or told her to go home with her fuck buddy. That way you could have your 'big' fuck scene and a little drama/payback. Your ending was like a soft turd hitting the floor. The author should read the stories written by some of the many fine writers that contribute to this site. I'm NOT a BTB guy. I actually prefer a happy ending, a reconciliation if the circumstances warrant it. I don't see it in this case. What you've written so far just indicates she's a cheating slut. If you were actually a writer you could change that perception. If you trying to write a erotic story you failed miserably. If you want erotic, checkout Dawn1958 or Walterio.

I feel like this author is about 14 or 15... How sad his life must be.

If you're too lazy to put an effort into your story... Don't fucking post it!

he ought to put a rope around her neck and drag her home behind the car

incomplete

are you going to finish this? as it stands it is a 1. if you finished it i would score higher.

I am hopeful. This needs completion, but the set up was all I would expect of...

....an LW story. Will it go on to be a BTB story? Will it devolve into another sadsack cuck story? Will it be another "Yes, but you've always had everything you wanted, you never missed out", kind of excuse-making? Has she been a slut all along, or was this another "oopsie" story?
I'm mildly interested, but must say, I'd have marched in there and kicked the living shit outta her fucktoy, then marched her home and sent her packing to her folks house. Or maybe not. Maybe I'd have quietly moved all the assets into hiding, blind-sold the house and disappeared one night while she was out (fucking around?) with friends. I most prefer the preemptive strike, but I think this boy was a little clueless or perhaps naive and too trusting. Either way, I'd be interested to see where you go with this. As I said at the outset, your set up (the story to this point) certainly got my attention.

Pathetic sissy faggot husband

and a CUNT wife who clearly has been cheating all along. No way this was a first time thing, it was just too easy for her. The faggot husband just watched, cried like a little sissy and let them fuck and then picked her up after, only a coward faggot would do that. The guy needs to grow a set and dump the heartless CUNT now. He should have left the skank at the reunion and never looked back.

5*

And we need a part 2, please.

Good Start

Now we need at least a ch 2 to finish the story. The ending left too many loose ends.

Great star

Don't make the husband into a wimp, those stories are old and are not interesting. I doubt any man would allow this to happen. Great story so far 5 stars. Hope to see ch 2 soon.

1 star for the rushed story and absolutely no ending!

Part 2?

Is there another part coming? I'm intrigued as to what happens next

what happened

It was pretty good until the end then nothing. As far as what she did what the hell you pushed her to go and you pushed her to wear the outfit, you discovered a new side to your wife go with it