Operation Daddy's Girl Ch. 00: Introduction

Fantastic story. Very well told and written. 5 stars. With that bit of back story commence Operation Daddy's Girl. Nicole has a bit of cheekiness that makes me smile and chuckle. Love the way you write her thoughts/narrative. I for one can't wait to see where you head from here. Excellent first effort, well done.

It's obvious ...

you've experience as a writer, even if this is your first published work. Love your style and the story 'feels' true - maybe it is! Look forward to the next installment.

Nice job

I'm liking where this is going. Your writing style is good, the fact that it does sound like a 19 year old thinking this makes it more endearing. Can't wait to read more :)

Can't wait...

....to watch this seething relationship between Nicole and her dad develop. I've a sense that you already have, at least in your mind, determined where this is headed. Well done, Nikki. Looking forward to future installments!

Great Beginning!

While you say this is your first published work, you do have excellent writing skills.
I loved the introduction and I am sure I'm going to love the entire seduction!
Nicole seems to be the total package with her love of classic rock a bonus.
While I believe you already know where this tale is going, I hope a stop for a threesome with Kelly is included. Please do not keep us waiting long for the next chapter.

Nice Start.

Very nice beginning. Looking forward to more. Suggestion: I t would be good to know a bit of background about how and why Nicole developed her feelings for her dad. That could still be filled in.

Obvious Errors

Apparently no one else noticed the obvious errors in this story. Kelley vs Kelly, you're vs your, stared vs starred, and 19 vs 19teen year old. It's hard to focus on the story when you see things like that. My email is master.4femalesub@yahoo.com, since Literotica has messed up my account and I cannot sign in.

Just Go For It

Sweet set up. Be confident. You write authentically.

Good start,don't leave us hanging

Great Start

You definitely have lots of writing talent. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for Chapter 2.

Smoke'n

great start and like others have said don't leave us hanging! Tell us all starting with getting ready for the party.

Great start hope to read part two very soon

Setting the stage----SWEET!

This has the makings of something very very HOT! Lets hope we see her in stockings and pumps and dad being very endowed (11 inches or 12 !!!) Lets keep them confident---no squeamish or timid scenes!!!

English classes aren't everything

You are very talented. I hope the story continues soon. Enjoyed very much

Maybe if you post a pic of your tits you'd get even more sympathy. Oh well, saying it's your first time writing seems to work, too. Oh, poor little you! All you want to do is write your sexy stories even though you is such bad at the English! (Translation: I'm too lazy and stupid to proof my work). But keep chugging along. At one page a chapter, maybe by Chapter 15 you'll have an awesome score.

Nice work

Please continue your story is really good even if some idiot say the contrary

For two posts behind me

Yeah, dude, don't be an idiot

Please update this