Who's to judge?!! Well done. Good story, hope you continue
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Anonymous03/05/15
Good story
I don't understand that earlier negative comment. I thought this was pretty well written on the whole. The ending was not as strong as the earlier parts but I enjoyed it and found it arousing - which is always the best measure!
I think a follow-up is called for!
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Anonymous03/11/15
Exciting
The story was very well written from my perspective because I would imagine this to be how it happens. Once the wife leaves the room, the next steps would happen quickly just as the story indicated. There wouldn't be much discussion, just action. I thought it was very well written, accurately timed, and very close to how I think it would happen. Looking for more!
English
Garbage
I mean this was just plain bad.
Consensual fun!
Who's to judge?!! Well done. Good story, hope you continue
Good story
I don't understand that earlier negative comment. I thought this was pretty well written on the whole. The ending was not as strong as the earlier parts but I enjoyed it and found it arousing - which is always the best measure!
I think a follow-up is called for!
Exciting
The story was very well written from my perspective because I would imagine this to be how it happens. Once the wife leaves the room, the next steps would happen quickly just as the story indicated. There wouldn't be much discussion, just action. I thought it was very well written, accurately timed, and very close to how I think it would happen. Looking for more!
Great story!
I loved it. More. PLEASE .
Cuckold needs chastity
Cuckold is there to serve. He should be in chastity, and only worry about his hot sexy wife and her lovers. Other wise, not a bad start.
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