Too short. The story is nice but it was too short.
You're probably right about that. The only reason I made part 2 so short is because there's no sex in it, so that way people only reading for sex scenes can directly skip to part 3 (whenever I get around to making it).
*make that not much sex.
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Too short. The story is nice but it was too short.
You're probably right about that. The only reason I made part 2 so short is because there's no sex in it, so that way people only reading for sex scenes can directly skip to part 3 (whenever I get around to making it).
*make that not much sex.
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