All Comments on 'Talking to Jemima'

Ogg, i really enjoyed this little bite of trickery!

I'm not quite sure what or who the website was being designed for but it served as a link for the two of them. And I'm also pretty sure she wasn't that sexy. But it was a read.

Like with most of your stories it leads in with just normal people, doing perfectly normal things. That you are capable of going from that to an erotic story in as short a number of words as you use is a display of incredible talent. Very good work.

Critique; Ah, can't say I saw too much wrong with it, least ways nothing that was in need of fixing. Would have liked the dialog to have gotten a little more flirty before the big reveal but that's my personal tastes.

Again a very nice story. With very identifiable characters.

MST

Short, sharp & pointed. No surplus idiocy.

An ideal short story.

Thank You, Ogg,

HP

A very nice bit of fun fluff. Right category. Thanks for posting it. (OK, three years ago, but still.)