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Dope Slave

byDan_A_Donovan©
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by Anonymous03/01/15

Great setup, needs more sex description

Hey man, fantastic to see some really degrading stuff on here. Just wish the sex scenes were a little more drawn out. That first time he fucks her, if you skip a paragraph you miss it. It almost reads like he's a one-pump chump.

With more detail in the sex and maybe some description of how she feels (her humiliation, her horror, her shame), you'd have a hot story.

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by Anonymous03/02/15

5 *

I love your story. It is very real life.

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