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Great setup, needs more sex description
Hey man, fantastic to see some really degrading stuff on here. Just wish the sex scenes were a little more drawn out. That first time he fucks her, if you skip a paragraph you miss it. It almost reads like he's a one-pump chump.
With more detail in the sex and maybe some description of how she feels (her humiliation, her horror, her shame), you'd have a hot story.
5 *
I love your story. It is very real life.
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