Best one page story that I have read in a long time. Welcome & congratulations. Keep writing, your new fans will demand more !!
Men have ties, but women have beautiful scarves !! Ellie & Quinn invite Brent to their apartment. They show him who is really in control !! Men like to think they are in control, but in reality that only happens, if the woman gives it up.
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Great First Submission
Best one page story that I have read in a long time.
Welcome & congratulations.
Keep writing, your new fans will demand more !!
How About A Sequel ?
Men have ties, but women have beautiful scarves !!
Ellie & Quinn invite Brent to their apartment.
They show him who is really in control !!
Men like to think they are in control, but in reality that only happens, if the woman gives it up.
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Back to The Party of My Life or
More submissions by soakingwet3232.