Needs a bit of editing to remove the typos and spelling errors....otherwise a good read...
A lovely story of a growing romance. As stated needs a bit of editing but was a lovely story I hope there is more to this as I would love to see these two develop more
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Needs a bit of editing to remove the typos and spelling errors....otherwise a good read...
Very romantic
A lovely story of a growing romance. As stated needs a bit of editing but was a lovely story I hope there is more to this as I would love to see these two develop more
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