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by wifesubmissive03/02/15

Thank You :)

I appreciate all feedback and suggestions. Hope to work and improve on my writing!

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by tnadnuder03/02/15

Here it is then...

I am not sure anymore if there is a right or wrong as far as apostrophes & quotation marks around dialogue (have read/heard both), but last sentence of first paragraph needs a period (or maybe a semicolon) where you've placed a comma.

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