Great story. Keep writing and don't let the jerk who wrote the negative review get to you. I liked the lead in to the story and how it built to a hot ending. Some may not think it is realistic, but it is fiction so make it go the way you want. The cluelessness of Nicole is entirely possible as my own kids have not a clue what their parents did sexually, and never will.
English
great start
It's Fiction
Great story. Keep writing and don't let the jerk who wrote the negative review get to you. I liked the lead in to the story and how it built to a hot ending. Some may not think it is realistic, but it is fiction so make it go the way you want. The cluelessness of Nicole is entirely possible as my own kids have not a clue what their parents did sexually, and never will.
Good Story
I like this story. Hopefully, you'll continue it and we'll get to see how nicole grows under Morgan's tutelage.
Wow
just Wow, an amazing erotic story
Great
Keep writing!
WOW
You have done it again. Another fantastic read. THANK YOU.
WOW AGAIN
I just reread your story. Bloody fantastic. I wrote the previous comment as Anonymous.
So cool!
I really like your stories, so much fun.
Very good.
Exciting, and a willing, truly consensual power exchange. Thank you.
Different scene. Not necessarily believable, but well written and enjoyable.
praise
this is by far one of the best stories i have read thanks for sharing well written
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