*grins*
Love the twist of the luncheon. And who can complain about getting to peep on Ethan and Kira's sex life. *winks* Hope you do amazing with the contest. *smiles*
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Anonymous03/04/15
great story
this story had me laughing. regards peter from melbourne
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Anonymous03/06/15
It's good to read your writing again!
I missed it.
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Anonymous03/08/15
not what i expected
from the name i expected something with beastiality
Love it when the asshole gets his comeuppance. I had no idea where this was going until the meal started, and that's when the grin took over my face. Ethan's a nasty fellow you wouldn't want to get on the wrong side of. My kind of guy.
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*grins*
Love the twist of the luncheon. And who can complain about getting to peep on Ethan and Kira's sex life. *winks* Hope you do amazing with the contest. *smiles*
great story
this story had me laughing. regards peter from melbourne
It's good to read your writing again!
I missed it.
not what i expected
from the name i expected something with beastiality
A.N. Cabin? I love her early stuff.
Good use of dialogue to move the story along and flesh out the characters.
Also, this may surprise you, but you actually horrified me for a minute. I know what you're thinking. Me?
I have an enormous soft spot for dogs.
One of my favorites you've ever written.
Oh my goodness!
Elliebabe has a mean streak. This was a fun story with some very disturbing moments. Very well done!
Fun Romp
Love it when the asshole gets his comeuppance. I had no idea where this was going until the meal started, and that's when the grin took over my face. Ethan's a nasty fellow you wouldn't want to get on the wrong side of. My kind of guy.
Great job Ellie - thanks for the chuckle.
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