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Introduction
Hello, Literotica readers! I forgot to post a short introduction before the story. I have been following Literotica for a few years now and decided to finally try my hand at writing erotic fiction. This is my first submission to the site. Comments and suggestions are more than welcome. I hope you find my stories fun and entertaining!
Very good!
Amazingly good, especially considering this was your first! Keep it up!
Very good for a first
Loved the story like look forward to a continuation... To bad they were interrupted by the oaf hubby. It was getting very hot.. like the description of the store keepers wife, I like what he was doing to her body...
amazing
I hope yoou'll kep on posting chapters because your work is totally amazing (maybe, a little more actual sex would be nice, though).
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tabbymidnite,
Thank you for the feedback. Yes, it's a shame that the Bard and Clara were interrupted by the fat husband. Maybe we'll see Clara again later and they'll finish what they started...
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