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Introduction
Hello, Literotica readers! I forgot to post a short introduction before the story. I have been following Literotica for a few years now and decided to finally try my hand at writing erotic fiction. This is my first submission to the site. Comments and suggestions are more than welcome. I hope you find my stories fun and entertaining!
Very good!
Amazingly good, especially considering this was your first! Keep it up!
Very good for a first
Loved the story like look forward to a continuation... To bad they were interrupted by the oaf hubby. It was getting very hot.. like the description of the store keepers wife, I like what he was doing to her body...
amazing
I hope yoou'll kep on posting chapters because your work is totally amazing (maybe, a little more actual sex would be nice, though).
A great first story!
This reminds me of my own little stories. I don't think there's anything that quite beats a fantastical romp involving adventure and slutty, busty women, and I'm glad to see you obviously agree.
I only hope the other chapters live up to the promise of this one! Keep up the good work, I shall be reading with great interest and delight.
RE: A great first story!
Thank you for the feedback, Thor99. I'll make sure to check out your stories as well!
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