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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/03/15

Nice short story. Cute ending. A little more character development at the start would have helpful.

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by Anonymous03/06/15

good start

It was a little fast-paced for me. I would have liked a bit more teasing and sensuality. It felt rather "wham bam, thank you ma'am" but I dig the idea of it. Rather nice!

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