Keep it up (literally)!
Very erotic, nice build-up, you achieved the purpose of erotic literature, you made this reader aroused. Going to read some more of your work now. :)
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I like where this is going!
Keep it up (literally)!
Arousing
Very erotic, nice build-up, you achieved the purpose of erotic literature, you made this reader aroused. Going to read some more of your work now. :)
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