The Trouble with Roommates Ch. 07

liked it but something missing

as i always fond of romance ... dont know but this story is treating nicole as victim and brian as rapist ... last part "6 " was nice when nicole was started feeling like brian's girl ... but this part i again got disappointed .. but liked it

Sad for Nicole

I originally thought that Brian was going to make her his girlfriend. But it seems as though Brian is just a sadistic user. She deserves better.

Disappointed

Started off so well but now Nicole gives up without any fight at all, few too many holes in this story now and I feel it's lost track of it's original route.

Hot!

Love the story and hope it continues. Wish you had written about the months in between story 6 & 7.

enjoyed it

i liked this one but i feel like they are far too short.

Lost it

I no longer like Brian or Nick's friends! You ruined a perfect story

Good, but not as good as the previous stories. I liked when nicole still struggled with her identity and whether or not she hated or enjoyed being this way. Get back to that and I'll be in heaven.

character development

The story is well done and moving along at a good pace. However it might be nice to see Nick/Nicole do some soul searching as to why he would rather become Nicole than return home to his parents. Confused gender identity keeping him in place, or is there more backstory that could enlighten the readers?

more

Please make more I really liked this one

Amazing Story, great chapter

Listen, I swear you are inside my head for fantasies. I've been full time for 2 years and this is laying out my kinks like a Wikipedia article. Don't let these bad comments deter you, you are heading in a perfect direction for this story and any trans woman that grew up afraid of what she was will thank you for it.

Moar?

The story is pretty good and the time since the last part is troubling, I hope we get to read more.

I've really enjoyed the story, feminization stories are some of my favorites and this one also had the perfect amount of domination, enough to be effective but not enough to be creepy.

...Until part 7 anyway, I don't think involving the buddies is a good idea (hope we don't see more of them) and it may have been too much in general. I'll admit I'd prefer a bit more romance (though punishments should stay) and apparently so do many others.

So consider it, but ultimately do what you think is best for the story, and above all don't be discouraged by criticism from continuing your great story.

I love this story

I love this story but I felt a bit sorry for Nicole when she had to gone her friends blow jobs I actually had to do the same thing when I broke a rule master invited all my guy friends over and told them I was a submissive slut that would love to please them

Please Keep This Going

I have been loving this story............ please continue....... We need to see where she/he ends up! I love that she is growing breast!

splendid arousal narration

omg ur narration gave me a hard on in my pants all through im reading n imagine how it would be reading all the parts at a time please continue n make her grow her breasts n make her a plumpy women n make her fuck the girls as a shemale hoping fr ur sooner next part..:)

My suggestion

Great story so far. I would like to see Nick's parents come over to visit.

More?

Is there more?

Luv this series!

Great story

Please don't stop. The story is great, however don't turn it into another guy turned shemale whore, we want to see Nicole fully feminized and happy as Brian's girl/wife.

Also can you make a chapter with Brian's point of view. Why he's doing this, why Nick and so on. That'd be great.

enjoying till the friends

I was loving this story until you ruined it with the friends i mean come on no way would friends turn that cold so quickly, so don't do anymore.