All Comments on 'Breeding Beth'

This story seems to have gotten out of control. Beth is basically being used, abused and raped for her fathers pleasure. She never expresses much if any consent or enjoyment. Sorry but I'm done following this storyline

Agree with lemonheads; this is not erotic, it's abuse pure and simple; Beth's father is a sack of shit, her uncles are repulsive, and her grandfather needs someone to hammer a lead pipe up his scungy old ass and teach him what it feels like to be ass-raped. This story has no redeeming factors; in any sane world, this girl would spike their drinks, douse them in gasoline, and throw a match on them. I don't want to know what happens next, now or ever.

Ignore the rest...I love it xxx

Bonnie, you're a piece of shit for saying what you did.

Hope this wasn't a true story, if it was I can only hope that all the men in up in jail and are gang raped every day of thier lives.

The story wasn't sexy or even a jerk off story unless your a sick bastard that gets off on hurting women.

Love it!!!

Is there going to be more

Maybe more to the story less to rape and abuse?

I just want to say that I'm the author, I'm a female, and these are genuinely my fantasies. If they don't get you off, I'm sorry you wasted your time. But I write these because they get me off, not to get you guys off.

Ignore the troll, sweetie. I'm female, too, and I understand the fantasy. But I'm pretty sure that those who leave those comments on sites like this are hypocrites afraid of their own desires. "Oh, I swear I only read it and opened it just to tell the author she's horrible." Psha, no. Even crazies have better things to do with their time. So keep it up and stay amazing! Hope there will be a sequel with a pregnant Bethie. <3

Loved this story, thanks for sharing!

Ignore the haters your work is amaze balls. I love it and I'm a girl and this is exactly the kind if story I need to fulfill my weird deprived fantasies. If you don't like her work don't read it. It's as simple as that.

So hot. Every time I read it leaves my pussy just aching. Can't wait to read more. Hope her daddy gets her knocked up soon.

This is so hot, leaves my pussy dripping. I hope you make another part where she gets pregnant. The little slut deserves it. Keep writing, this is fantastic. I love your fantasy

Please don't stop writing. I'm a woman and I love your stories. Bethie is such a lucky girl, I wish I could be used just like her.

I'm a female and would also would like to be used like this lucky slut!

My cunt is so wet and throbbing! Next story maybe have a cock

in each of her tight little holes while she watches step mom getting

Fucked

I'm a man. A real man. I'm also a real MotherFucker and we have two children, twins, so I have no problems with incest it it is between adults and with consent. But this is abuse of a woman and rape. Yes I read this all because I do not comment if I do not read it. Well, I did and I don't understand these other women who have commented favourably about this. I give it to my woman as hard, as fast, and as many times as she wants. But only because she wants it.

i love all of your depraved stories, short and easy to read, it get so hot my ear is burning while reading it , just a suggestion, you into golden shower?

I Read this Story Last! Every Story About Beth and Her Family is Fun and Exciting! Beth was Naïve but Very Willing! Not Done With This Story I Hope! Great Stuff!

i read your profile and I'm a little surprised that you're a female. I'm glad though because I have thought for many years that only males write like this.

She is being somewhat abused by her father, et al. However, Bethie also appears to like having a cock inside her cunt and having the men erupt inside her trying to knock her up.

Too bad daddy doesn't want her in a garter belt, stockings, and cut our bra to make the men think she really is a whore.

Step mom needs to get involved too. Daddy could have her fucking her father while he is fucking Bethie.

Step mom could pee all over Bethie.

It's fiction and if people have a problem reading it, then let them hit the delete key and have it go away.

Please more! Or where can we find more of your writing?

im a female and i loved it! wish i could be used and bred like beth

I love all your stories!! Please don't stop writing!!

Well there should be a smorgasbord section then. There's some really freaky people out there. I've written several stories with multiple fetishes and they're all still awaiting audiences. Such mixed arrangements ncluding bondage discipline, Domination submission, sadism masochism, bw-wm/interracial, menage-a-trois, non-consent/reluctance, incest-taboo, and now I'm even trying my hand at adding in the sci-fy/non-human aspect. I love stories with witches/love spells, werewolves/knotting, ghosts/hauntings, vampires/bloodsucking, paired with other fetish stories. It's erotica, (spelled p-o-r-n), it's not Sunday School class. If people don't like a story, they shouldn't criticise it; they should move onto something they will enjoy more. HINT: readers, learn how to use the "tags portal." I literally NEVER waste my time on here reading stories I'm not interested in.

Those people saying it’s abuse,

It’s a fantasy. Fantasies are often abuse. And it’s often the person imagining the fantasy that is in the “victim” role.

I am a woman and I came three times, and I’m not into incest or breeding, but I am in to using a woman for sadistic pleasure and it was me I imagined in the role of Beth. I want some more sadistic dominance in my sex life and I come here to read erotica because it’s just not realistic to expect in a loving marriage, which I also have. Keep writing, I love your stuff

Part 2??? X

I'm also a female, and I love your stories, of course this would be wrong in real life 😒 but that's not the point it's a fantasy

Omg i imagined myself being bethie and being used by a lot of men and while i was reading i had my hand in my knickers i orgasmed about when her grandpa took her ass iv never had a cock in my ass yet but want to try it this is hot and i think i would really enjoy being slutty like this my name is Angel

WOW! Yesssss!!

I’m a woman and this was hot! It’s obviously safe because it’s a fantasy and I’m actually in control cos it’s in my own head. Critics could benefit from some deeper thinking here lol