Breeding Beth

This story seems to have gotten out of control. Beth is basically being used, abused and raped for her fathers pleasure. She never expresses much if any consent or enjoyment. Sorry but I'm done following this storyline

What a bloody awful story

Agree with lemonheads; this is not erotic, it's abuse pure and simple; Beth's father is a sack of shit, her uncles are repulsive, and her grandfather needs someone to hammer a lead pipe up his scungy old ass and teach him what it feels like to be ass-raped. This story has no redeeming factors; in any sane world, this girl would spike their drinks, douse them in gasoline, and throw a match on them. I don't want to know what happens next, now or ever.

I am so sorry for all the bad things that happened to you...

Dear author: I am so sorry for all the abuse you suffered as a child. What your family members did to you was wrong. I imagine that writing these stories is like therapy for you. Hope you are able to find the healing and loving and understanding that you so desperately need. My heart is breaking for you.

lovin it

Ignore the rest...I love it xxx

Bonnie, you're a piece of shit for saying what you did.

Sure

Hope this wasn't a true story, if it was I can only hope that all the men in up in jail and are gang raped every day of thier lives.
The story wasn't sexy or even a jerk off story unless your a sick bastard that gets off on hurting women.

Love it!!!

love it

Is there going to be more

Maybe more to the story less to rape and abuse?

soo...

I just want to say that I'm the author, I'm a female, and these are genuinely my fantasies. If they don't get you off, I'm sorry you wasted your time. But I write these because they get me off, not to get you guys off.

To bittykitty

Ignore the troll, sweetie. I'm female, too, and I understand the fantasy. But I'm pretty sure that those who leave those comments on sites like this are hypocrites afraid of their own desires. "Oh, I swear I only read it and opened it just to tell the author she's horrible." Psha, no. Even crazies have better things to do with their time. So keep it up and stay amazing! Hope there will be a sequel with a pregnant Bethie.

Very sexy

Loved this story, thanks for sharing!

Hey

Ignore the haters your work is amaze balls. I love it and I'm a girl and this is exactly the kind if story I need to fulfill my weird deprived fantasies. If you don't like her work don't read it. It's as simple as that.

So hot. Every time I read it leaves my pussy just aching. Can't wait to read more. Hope her daddy gets her knocked up soon.

So hot

This is so hot, leaves my pussy dripping. I hope you make another part where she gets pregnant. The little slut deserves it. Keep writing, this is fantastic. I love your fantasy