Ӕgir's Captive Pt. 06

someone get a fire extinguisher

whew! We've got a fire risk and im combusting here! Great chapter, i beg for more...

Wow

Just wow. Was that hot or what.!!
He is one sick motherfucker and definitely one who I would like to see on the business end of his own knife.
Excellent gripping and oh so descriptive writing

trust

It is right ...she do not trust them...this is rape and torture because she as not GIVEN permission for this. I read again the previous chapters, I don't see a strong cause enought to justify this behavior. I know this is not consent and is cristal clear she is not willing. But to talk about her submissive nature is stupid...BECAUSE SHE CANT MOVE...SHE DIDT NOT AGREE TO BE PUT IN THIS SITUATION...SHE DID NOT GAVE UP CONTROL...IT WAS TAKEN FROM HER....THERE FOR this is torture and rape. Just because a man can make you come doesnt make you willing or submissive or masochist. And futher more....drawing blood is a BIG BIGGGG "NO NO". I would only hope that you keep on the non consent part of this story being realistic and keep her non willing and not make another magic dick story. Her falling in love and live happily ever after just is not real...I was rape 22 years ago..I'm not traumatise sexually speaking...i dont have trust issues...i'm not scared of the dark...i dont even remember the rape all that well because i was out for most of it.....but even When I cant remember it ...still rape ..and I will hate that mother fucker 'till the day I die.... since it is free acces and you allow comments I assume you are open to different opinions. And i dont care about the opinion of any one else but the author.

Nope nope nope

I'm jumping ship.

Mentally deranged people don't make for a good read

This has taken a sickening turn. Way too much. No more for me. UGH!

hope this is a long one

Very hot, I would disagree with the comments that this story has gone over the edge. I would say it is teetering on the edge though and if you can maintain that dangerous balance this will continue to be one explosively hot story.

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They want her to bind to them through Stockholm Syndrome?! Well, I guess they are Nordic. If a guy cut me with a knife in my girl bits someday he would wake-up without his boys.

WHY :'''-(

Loved the earlier ones, but this one has gotten creepy and gross. please no more blood and way less of him thinking about his young daughter while he torturers his "wife". She started off way less submissive, please don't be so obvious and rush her into this.

Too short! This is so hot!

Wow, did you polarize people with this chapter! Obviously, so far, readers either love it or hate it. While I don't see the attraction with knife play, I can see the fascination some people have for it. To be on the receiving end would, I imagine, heighten the senses to the nth level and make the following pleasure that much more intense. And something tells me that sex with this brother would be very intense no matter what he did.

It would be a pretty boring story if all the brothers screwed in the same way. But you rightfully have them staying true to who they are and their own needs/pleasures. And you are staying true to the premise of the story. What they need from her as a wife and what she needs from each of them as her husbands, will be different. I picture Bjorn as being more of a sweet, playful partner. Only time will show if I guessed right.

Another well done chapter.

Loving this...

Please hurry with chapter 7. :)

love it

love the direction you're going with the series just wondering if she's going to have any aftercare? because of the handcuff and scratches also will there be a moment where she's going to want to "jump ship"?

thank you mm

Great story!

...can't wait to read the next chapter.

Conflicted

This is a very well written story and although there are elements of it that I really don't like, I also find it compelling.

Personally, I don't really understand the appeal of knife and blood play, but I do understand that it takes a lot of trust in a partner to take part in it. Kirsty has absolutely no reason to trust any of her abductors, and considering her treatment so far, (except for Bjorn), she has every reason to be afraid of them. With this in mind, what Mikael does to her here is little more than a quite terrifying assault by a stranger with a deadly weapon, while she is bound and helpless.

While Mikael is lost in the eroticism of his feelings, Kirsty is not. Even if she has somewhat darker sexual tastes, I seriously doubt she would enjoy this, and I wonder how the brothers expect to bind their 'wife' to them by brutalising her so violently.

I have enjoyed reading the story so far, the viewpoints of the characters are interesting, and it skirts the line of brutality, reluctance and erotic coercion. Kirsty seems to be capable of intelligent thought, and reason, and I really hope this is not going to turn into another 'magic dick' story, where the woman is suddenly sells herself out to become a brainless doormat willing to put up with any kind of rape and abuse for a series of extremely unlikely orgasms.

I am interested to see what happens next...

This knife business is way too much.

Maybe this chapter was better suited to fetish? Disfiguring her and drinking her blood was so repulsive, I lost all sympathy for Mikael.

I do still find your story interesting but I don't think I'll enjoy reading about this brother any more.