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Glad to See . . .
her efforts are being rewarded and she's been reunited with her kitty but please, could you make the chapters a little longer? We don't mind waiting if it's worth it when it arrives.
BTW, the correct usage would be clothes or clothing. Cloth has not yet been shaped into clothes so she couldn't have arrived wearing cloth, she was wearing clothes.
Thank you
Thank you for your feednack. Next chapter is huge! Submitting it today!
I'm thinking she got dressed
And snuck out the back door. Why stick around to be tortured? And what's erotic or fun about torturing another human being? Absolute drivel.
Distractions
Dust *cloths* might be found in a kitchen cabinet and wash *cloths* in a linen closet.
You would find *clothes* to wear in your bedroom closet or a dresser.
I'm not a spelling nazi, but the 2nd & 3rd mispellings of the same everday word are incredibly distracting and pull me out of the story.
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