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Get someone to ...
... teach you how to Proof Read, Spell, use correct grammar and correct punctuation.
Then you might produce something worthy of people wasting their time reading.
Great Story .....
Found your first attempt a very good one !!! .... Exciting subject matter !!! Keep it up.
sorry
Pay no attention to these idiot word police that have nothing good to say about anything.Good story.Thanks
re: sorry
Ah yes, the reaction of the illiterate and insignificant.
Do you understand what the terms commenting and criticism mean? Well, obviously not or you wouldn’t have posted such an inane comment.
Please use an editor.
PLEASE!
hot story
This was a hot story. Thank you for posting.
Good story but______
Good story keep writing, but next time I want his wife to get fucked good by the guy with the big dick
Great stuff.
Enjoyed it all. Theere is no ending and there are numerous typos, but who cares. I loved it, 5 stars easily.
Good topic with a cuckold want to be.
The story as a whole was somewhat rushed. A bit more detail and work up on your hot wife would have made it hotter. Your hot wife has every reason to think you do not mind. She really enjoyed it, from the young stud and the others. She is so close to just letting go and getting all the extra she can. Bet she also enjoyed seeing the sexy wife and really wanted to join her.
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