All Comments on 'I Saw My Neighbor Get Gang Fucked'

... teach you how to Proof Read, Spell, use correct grammar and correct punctuation.

Then you might produce something worthy of people wasting their time reading.

Found your first attempt a very good one !!! .... Exciting subject matter !!! Keep it up.

Pay no attention to these idiot word police that have nothing good to say about anything.Good story.Thanks

Ah yes, the reaction of the illiterate and insignificant.

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Do you understand what the terms commenting and criticism mean? Well, obviously not or you wouldn’t have posted such an inane comment.

PLEASE!

This was a hot story. Thank you for posting.

Good story keep writing, but next time I want his wife to get fucked good by the guy with the big dick

Enjoyed it all. Theere is no ending and there are numerous typos, but who cares. I loved it, 5 stars easily.

The story as a whole was somewhat rushed. A bit more detail and work up on your hot wife would have made it hotter. Your hot wife has every reason to think you do not mind. She really enjoyed it, from the young stud and the others. She is so close to just letting go and getting all the extra she can. Bet she also enjoyed seeing the sexy wife and really wanted to join her.

Question was this this husband who narrated this tale expect his wife would get fucked too after all she was cock teasing. She could have easily been used for another gang bang, it was that kind of party after all.

I like how the story got to the point. Still would have liked to see his wife get pressured into it to. Or already have been surprise fucked while sitting in the lounge room.

Thank You all for the comments, no matter how harsh. This is not a made up story and I am no writer. Still I will take your advice when writing in the future.

I would love to join and fuk her wetness

a good straight public group sharing and for sure your wife will welcome Rich soon when you are at work

Some good hot stuff but I couldn't keep track of who was getting the shaft. Neighbors wife was off in one room and the writer's wife was down for the big dick in another - then the story hops to the neighbor's wife hollering "fuck yeah" while getting gangbanged. Confused me, one or both women getting laid?

Writing with one hand and jacking with the other makes one lose track! Good story but ......

Friend used to do that with his wife , so he could have guys testify in court that she cheated with them all , so the judge wouldn't give her all his stuff in the divorce. He g a ngbanged her often, with his other sport fucking conquests on the same bed

This is just really poor. Are all Latins so ignorant? What a lame main character, and the whole thing's just horribly long-winded.

The plot's okay, the writing's okay, the psychology questionable.

It had it's moments of anticipatory excitement but left it all hanging.