great work and i love your perverted mind. keep up the good work.
Not a single original or clever thing in this mess. And I bet a 12 year old wrote the dialogue. Just horrible.
I'm loving where I'm hoping this story well end up with Her falling in love with Andie as Andy seems to have fallen in love with Tammy. Keep up the great story line and be sure to proof read. Checks instead of Cheeks. ; )
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so good
great work and i love your perverted mind. keep up the good work.
Pedestrian drivel
Not a single original or clever thing in this mess. And I bet a 12 year old wrote the dialogue. Just horrible.
I'm loving where I'm hoping this story well end up with Her falling in love with Andie as Andy seems to have fallen in love with Tammy. Keep up the great story line and be sure to proof read. Checks instead of Cheeks. ; )
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