Exellent style and story presentation. I could see this turning into a nice little series or at least a few decent ones. Wonderful to see more and more ladies here writing. Hope it helps us guys write better for you.
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Exellent style and story presentation. I could see this turning into a nice little series or at least a few decent ones. Wonderful to see more and more ladies here writing. Hope it helps us guys write better for you.
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