I appreciate any positive comments or constructive criticism.
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Anonymous03/06/15
I enjoyed this
It was nice and sweet and made me feel warm inside. You should write more stories. Also capitalize your " I" .
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Anonymous03/07/15
nice and sexy
nice and sexy. A nice break from the stories of massive abuse appearing on Saturday morning. Your story was not filled with abuse. I think yours is a proper BDSM story.
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I appreciate any positive comments or constructive criticism.
I enjoyed this
It was nice and sweet and made me feel warm inside. You should write more stories. Also capitalize your " I" .
nice and sexy
nice and sexy. A nice break from the stories of massive abuse appearing on Saturday morning. Your story was not filled with abuse. I think yours is a proper BDSM story.
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