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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous03/05/15

Very Nice!

I like this a lot. Let's see some more.

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by Kowboy6103/06/15

Only one error ...

... that I found. Other than that I liked your initial effort. The mistake did not detract from your tale at all. In fact, I appreciate your efforts and would like to read more of your writings.

The error occurs in the fourth paragraph's last line. I believe that "birds flying overheard" should be birds flying overhead. If I am wrong, I hope that you accept my apology.

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by maddict03/16/15

You are a naughty girl.

Tall tree's and bushes don't often sheild you from your own drive.

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by FiftyShadesFuckedUp03/20/15

really hot!!

Im usually not into the whole slapping around thing but that was really well done. Good job and keep writing!

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