All Comments on 'A Dance with The Devil'

Really happy how that turned out, keep writing and good luck!

a FIVE only because they don't have TENS!

Very enjoyable read. Thank you for your story.

Thanks for sharing.

Let your demon out. Wow. Beauty. Thanks

loved it

more stories please

Brilliant with a capital B

A great take on April fools

Another great story, I hope it places in the contest!

5 *

Unreliable narrator? That's a tag? What a hoot! Enjoyed!

Incredibly hot story, and told in such a vividly described ways it made me feel like I was there and believe me, I was more than happy to be there. Internal narrative was excellent, storytelling simple and elegant because of that very simplicity.

Dialog was minimal, but then who has air to speak in the middle of that furnace? Very, very good work.

Critique: I saw only one thing that caught my eye and that was minuscule. (and might just be my ignorance) Can you still pole dance while covered in oil? I always thought you needed ski friction to maintain grip. I caught that she had on gloves and then had him take them off, so yes her hands would still be clear, but would she not slick up the whole pole?

Again, wonderful story. Hot, sexy and I must say i think I like your inner devil a lot more than my own. She seems like more fun.

MST

A magically drawn story that i enjoyed immensely. Thank you for sharing your writing talent with me.

I'm beyond honored.

Another wonderful tale from the young woman who is quickly becoming our Queen of the Damned, as far as Erotic Horror is concerned.

Wow, Roz. This is amazing. I can't be the only one that knows you're writing about me, right? So much tension in so few words. Excellent work.

A soul is bared, a carefully crafted life of moderation and 'behaving' is demolished. The devil inside is given free rein, and the result is nothing less than fantastic. Two lives will never be the same. If only it were true, if only there was a way to break free, to let go, to become that unbridled beast, that whirlwind of sexuality and sensuality.

All women have that devil inside, yearning to break free. Don't they? Please?

Rozalin triumphs once again. I'm in awe of her ability to craft so much emotion, so many truisms into such a beautifully crafted, hellaciously hot tale.

It's invigorating to read another talented author in this genre. Great imagination and pretty well executed. You'll be rising up the popularity lists quickly. Good work, long may it continue.

hi well i hope u r going to add to there walk on the wild side of hot sex with others and in all places nice story

Whew! It's left me panting..

This was incredible! Is there more coming???

Please say yes! I hope you will decide to write more! Either continue this or write something else new! Please! You new fan!

Cheers!

My satisfaction with this story spilleth over.

Work it girl!

Your attention to detail and writing style just relit my fire. Thank you, I'm off to write again after a long time. Great inspiration!

Great but so short..

I enjoy you'r writing style i like that you don't just write sex but substance too.. i have read two of your stories so far and getting ready to read another.. thank you for sharing your stories

Even though the rating system only goes up to five, I give this one a 666.

The twist of this story was fantastic. Surprisingly wholesome while still depraved. I wish you had more content here than the 3 stories you have. Still, these 3 stories are phenomenal!