A Dance with The Devil

I was pleasantly surprised :)

Really happy how that turned out, keep writing and good luck!

You need to write more

a FIVE only because they don't have TENS!

LOVED IT

Very enjoyable read. Thank you for your story.

Great!

Thanks for sharing.

Well done!

Let your demon out. Wow. Beauty. Thanks

loved it

loved it
more stories please

Brilliant with a capital B

Brilliant with a capital B

Fan-fucking-tastic

A great take on April fools

Short and sweet

Another great story, I hope it places in the contest!

Another stellar tale

5 *

Unreliable narrator? That's a tag? What a hoot! Enjoyed!

Sizzlingly hot

Incredibly hot story, and told in such a vividly described ways it made me feel like I was there and believe me, I was more than happy to be there. Internal narrative was excellent, storytelling simple and elegant because of that very simplicity.

Dialog was minimal, but then who has air to speak in the middle of that furnace? Very, very good work.

Critique: I saw only one thing that caught my eye and that was minuscule. (and might just be my ignorance) Can you still pole dance while covered in oil? I always thought you needed ski friction to maintain grip. I caught that she had on gloves and then had him take them off, so yes her hands would still be clear, but would she not slick up the whole pole?

Again, wonderful story. Hot, sexy and I must say i think I like your inner devil a lot more than my own. She seems like more fun.

MST

Beautifully imagined

A magically drawn story that i enjoyed immensely. Thank you for sharing your writing talent with me.

I'm beyond honored.

Another wonderful tale from the young woman who is quickly becoming our Queen of the Damned, as far as Erotic Horror is concerned.

Smokin hot.

Wow, Roz. This is amazing. I can't be the only one that knows you're writing about me, right? So much tension in so few words. Excellent work.

Exposed: What all men know, (or privately hope)

A soul is bared, a carefully crafted life of moderation and 'behaving' is demolished. The devil inside is given free rein, and the result is nothing less than fantastic. Two lives will never be the same. If only it were true, if only there was a way to break free, to let go, to become that unbridled beast, that whirlwind of sexuality and sensuality.

All women have that devil inside, yearning to break free. Don't they? Please?

Rozalin triumphs once again. I'm in awe of her ability to craft so much emotion, so many truisms into such a beautifully crafted, hellaciously hot tale.

Exciting

It's invigorating to read another talented author in this genre. Great imagination and pretty well executed. You'll be rising up the popularity lists quickly. Good work, long may it continue.

MORE

hi well i hope u r going to add to there walk on the wild side of hot sex with others and in all places nice story

HOT!

Whew! It's left me panting..

Damn hot!

This was incredible! Is there more coming???
Please say yes! I hope you will decide to write more! Either continue this or write something else new! Please! You new fan!
Cheers!