All Comments on 'The Master and the Ring Ch. 12'

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txcrackertxcrackerabout 9 years ago
Excellent As Usual !

Thank you for an EXCELLENT series and a Stupendous ending . 5 Stars as usual . Added to my favorites so I can reread later !

Thanks

tx cracker

longknob14longknob14about 9 years ago
Great tale of tails!

What a wonderful story! I waited months for the last chapter. Its sad that its finished.. but yes.. all good things come to an end sadly.

Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Disappointing end.

What a great story... and such a disappointing end..

The anal sex could have continued .. why did it have to stop!

nashman1000nashman1000almost 9 years ago
Great story

I have enjoyed reading all 12 part. I just discovered the series a couple of weeks ago, so I didn't have to wait for each to come out. Great job writing them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Absolutely amazing story.

I came across this tale doing a random Google phrase search. I was fortunate enough to be able to read the whole story without waiting for postings. I found it wildly erotic and well presented. Thank you for this excellent story. And now I have all your other postings yet to read. Oh joy, oh bliss!

jwmcleanjwmcleanover 4 years ago
wonderfully crafted story

Thanks I loved each chapter, I especially liked how you gave each person POV in the story.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 2 years ago

Perfectly Awesome ! Each authors have little signature phrases that identify them . Can you guess what yours is ?

Up until this story you had used it frequently . " My cock lurched a little " or a variant thereof . Lurch was used a couple few times in this story . But not in the same context . Another reason this story was a little different . Well done .

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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